Comments for Confessions of an Unpublished Writer http://thealphabetkid.wordpress.com Wondering what comes next... Sat, 29 Aug 2009 17:58:56 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on The Lincoln Memorial by David Kellas http://thealphabetkid.wordpress.com/2009/07/30/the-lincoln-memorial/#comment-31 David Kellas Sat, 29 Aug 2009 17:58:56 +0000 http://thealphabetkid.wordpress.com/?p=52#comment-31 the lincoln memorial was a place i appreaciated visiting back a fiew years ago... really eery feeling to it :( the lincoln memorial was a place i appreaciated visiting back a fiew years ago… really eery feeling to it :(

]]> Comment on Chapter 1 by thealphabetkid http://thealphabetkid.wordpress.com/2009/08/18/chapter-1/#comment-30 thealphabetkid Wed, 19 Aug 2009 13:31:22 +0000 http://thealphabetkid.wordpress.com/?p=59#comment-30 Danielle, this isn't a sequel, I don't write sequels, well not yet anyway, this is the re-write. Nikki, just read this as if you know nothing and ignore the previous comment. Danielle, this isn’t a sequel, I don’t write sequels, well not yet anyway, this is the re-write. Nikki, just read this as if you know nothing and ignore the previous comment.

]]> Comment on Chapter 1 by Nikki http://thealphabetkid.wordpress.com/2009/08/18/chapter-1/#comment-29 Nikki Wed, 19 Aug 2009 03:34:08 +0000 http://thealphabetkid.wordpress.com/?p=59#comment-29 Hey Mike, I see that there is a book before this that I did not read. (Please send and don't give it to Troy or he will put ir in a "SAFE PLACE") The transition is a little weak, I kinda wasn't following. And a few grammer things - Paragraph 4 there is a few things that dn't make sense and a few that don't flow well the main thing that doesn't sound right is well the first words that the voice speaks "You do to know what you..." and " ... hard "e" sound from crazy spinning it off...". And I guess I would have to have read the other book to get were the magic comes in because ya lost me. But other than me being a bitch, (you know I can't help but say what im thinkin, I come by it honestly Troy was a influence on my life) but other than the above stated you have always liked your writing. Talk and see you soon!! Nikki Hey Mike,
I see that there is a book before this that I did not read. (Please send and don’t give it to Troy or he will put ir in a “SAFE PLACE”)

The transition is a little weak, I kinda wasn’t following.

And a few grammer things – Paragraph 4 there is a few things that dn’t make sense and a few that don’t flow well the main thing that doesn’t sound right is well the first words that the voice speaks “You do to know what you…” and ” … hard “e” sound from crazy spinning it off…”.

And I guess I would have to have read the other book to get were the magic comes in because ya lost me.

But other than me being a bitch, (you know I can’t help but say what im thinkin, I come by it honestly Troy was a influence on my life) but other than the above stated you have always liked your writing.

Talk and see you soon!!
Nikki

]]> Comment on Chapter 1 by Attila the Hunnie http://thealphabetkid.wordpress.com/2009/08/18/chapter-1/#comment-28 Attila the Hunnie Tue, 18 Aug 2009 21:27:45 +0000 http://thealphabetkid.wordpress.com/?p=59#comment-28 Ola. ooooh...a sequel! I was going to write the same thing as "Crazy" above in that you need a better transition into the flashback. Other than that, pretty good. The only thing is the voices...I don't remember them in the first book...you gonna add them during the re-write or explain their sudden presence in teh sequel in a plausible way? Great work! xo Ola.

ooooh…a sequel!

I was going to write the same thing as “Crazy” above in that you need a better transition into the flashback. Other than that, pretty good.

The only thing is the voices…I don’t remember them in the first book…you gonna add them during the re-write or explain their sudden presence in teh sequel in a plausible way?

Great work!
xo

]]> Comment on Chapter 1 by Crazy Jay http://thealphabetkid.wordpress.com/2009/08/18/chapter-1/#comment-27 Crazy Jay Tue, 18 Aug 2009 19:27:56 +0000 http://thealphabetkid.wordpress.com/?p=59#comment-27 Mike, Awesome. i can totally get into this style of writing of yours. it took me a minute to understand why all of a sudden he was in the water, but then i got it, a Flashback... Im already interested in what David did, where did he come from and why is there magic going on a door.... looking forward to the next chapter bud. Mike,

Awesome. i can totally get into this style of writing of yours. it took me a minute to understand why all of a sudden he was in the water, but then i got it, a Flashback…

Im already interested in what David did, where did he come from and why is there magic going on a door….

looking forward to the next chapter bud.

]]> Comment on Wow, and Then Some by DarkMonkey http://thealphabetkid.wordpress.com/2009/07/10/wow-and-then-some/#comment-25 DarkMonkey Fri, 10 Jul 2009 19:34:09 +0000 http://thealphabetkid.wordpress.com/?p=48#comment-25 Martin Streek was 45 (born in 64). The bio that shows him being 55 was actually Joe Strummer's... He worked at the edge for 25 yrs. Martin Streek was 45 (born in 64). The bio that shows him being 55 was actually Joe Strummer’s… He worked at the edge for 25 yrs.

]]> Comment on Freakangels by Attila the Hunnie http://thealphabetkid.wordpress.com/2008/05/30/freakangels/#comment-21 Attila the Hunnie Tue, 18 Nov 2008 18:24:25 +0000 http://thealphabetkid.wordpress.com/?p=25#comment-21 I can't remember if I ever told you that I started reading them. Not bad...I don't personally find it riviting, but it's definitely an interesting concept and I'm curious enough about where it's going to go to keep reading it. I can’t remember if I ever told you that I started reading them. Not bad…I don’t personally find it riviting, but it’s definitely an interesting concept and I’m curious enough about where it’s going to go to keep reading it.

]]> Comment on New Job, New Beginnings, New Everything by Attila the Hunnie http://thealphabetkid.wordpress.com/2008/09/23/new-job-new-beginnings-new-everything/#comment-20 Attila the Hunnie Tue, 18 Nov 2008 18:23:07 +0000 http://thealphabetkid.wordpress.com/?p=28#comment-20 Wow...I had no idea man, well I had some idea, but didn't realize the extent of it. I don't think we get together enough. Sorry about how rough it was and I'm glad that you got through it. I wish you luck on figuring your shit out. It seems like that's the theme of the past year...shit, and figuring out if it can be used to fertilize something or not. As for diaries...I've kept some on and off during my life and I too have been meaning to get back to it with no luck...been a handful of years since I've kept one for a period of a few months or more. I've reread some of mine from when I was 12 and 16/17...I can't say that it gave me all that many insights, but it can be great fodder for a story and/or a good laugh... And who says it's wrinkly old men? I bet you it's a bunch of old, tough wrinkly broads playin' puppeteer... Wow…I had no idea man, well I had some idea, but didn’t realize the extent of it. I don’t think we get together enough. Sorry about how rough it was and I’m glad that you got through it.

I wish you luck on figuring your shit out. It seems like that’s the theme of the past year…shit, and figuring out if it can be used to fertilize something or not.

As for diaries…I’ve kept some on and off during my life and I too have been meaning to get back to it with no luck…been a handful of years since I’ve kept one for a period of a few months or more. I’ve reread some of mine from when I was 12 and 16/17…I can’t say that it gave me all that many insights, but it can be great fodder for a story and/or a good laugh…

And who says it’s wrinkly old men? I bet you it’s a bunch of old, tough wrinkly broads playin’ puppeteer…

]]> Comment on Thanks for giving and assorted other crap by Attila the Hunnie http://thealphabetkid.wordpress.com/2008/10/14/thanks-for-giving-and-assorted-other-crap/#comment-19 Attila the Hunnie Tue, 18 Nov 2008 18:12:43 +0000 http://thealphabetkid.wordpress.com/?p=30#comment-19 Ooops...it's been a while since I checked this out; my bad. It looks a lot better now...easier to read. Wow...and I thought I was tired and depressed. 0_o Oh wait, yes I am. But you sound so much more sophisticated and philosophical wading through your muck than I do while doing so in mine. ;) And yes, the burn out and the idiot box are major causes of getting no writing down for years... Ooops…it’s been a while since I checked this out; my bad. It looks a lot better now…easier to read.

Wow…and I thought I was tired and depressed. 0_o Oh wait, yes I am. But you sound so much more sophisticated and philosophical wading through your muck than I do while doing so in mine. ;)

And yes, the burn out and the idiot box are major causes of getting no writing down for years…

]]> Comment on Happy Goth Christmas, Samhain, All Hallow’s Eve, and even Halloween by Fashion News » Blog Archive » Happy Goth Christmas, Samhain, All Hallow’s Eve, and even Halloween http://thealphabetkid.wordpress.com/2008/10/31/happy-goth-christmas-samhain-all-hallows-eve-and-even-halloween/#comment-17 Fashion News » Blog Archive » Happy Goth Christmas, Samhain, All Hallow’s Eve, and even Halloween Fri, 31 Oct 2008 17:10:29 +0000 http://thealphabetkid.wordpress.com/?p=32#comment-17 [...] Confessions of an Unpublished Writer added an interesting post today on Happy Goth Christmas, Samhain, All Hallow’s Eve, and even HalloweenHere’s a small reading [...] [...] Confessions of an Unpublished Writer added an interesting post today on Happy Goth Christmas, Samhain, All Hallow’s Eve, and even HalloweenHere’s a small reading [...]

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